Ravenous

These two pictures both show hunger, which is what ravenous means.  The one on the right shows a child's hunger before dinner, they are 'starving' and they cannot wait for dinner.  The one on the left is so hungry that the child needed to lick the plate.  I chose to put the text in a small thin font on the very bottom of the photo because being ravenous means you are to the end of your limits with hunger.  Being at the bottom of the bottle per say. 


This is what i wrote for my photos and my peers critiqued it and gave me more comments.  The statements they added were, The right image shows irony, because you don't need cookies but you are so hungry you need to eat something.  They agreed with my placement of the word ravenous and the font i chose.  They also liked the way i spaced out the letters so it made the word look lighter and empty.